|Reviews for frozen time|
| Time To Change chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
like how ya manage to get the point across, and that it is easy to relate to, everyone wants to stop the clock sometimes.
ps.. thank you for commenting on my work :)
| ZionsAflame chapter 1 . 9/29/2006
if you were trying for a song then the structure needs some help but otherwise it's great...