Reviews for The Crypt Under Shadow Avenue
fairychild chapter 106 . 11/7/2014
i have to admit... this is completely amazing... I started reading this as a bit of a bedtime story... Didn't sleep a wink, but staying up to finish was totally worth it... Will be waiting impatiently for your next update though... :D
Jacks Ace chapter 106 . 11/4/2014
Werekid chapter 106 . 10/26/2014
Yes! You're back! I am so scared Luke's gonna be dead or a big bad goon :(
But I can't wait for the next update! XD
P.s, happy Halloween week!
LeKo chapter 106 . 10/26/2014
Whatever your troubles, you keep going strong. At least I will stay as patient as you want me.
Greeneye chapter 106 . 10/25/2014
You're back! Lived the chapter of course!
Faradays chapter 106 . 10/24/2014
Welcome back!

And OF COURSE Judith is a dork. What else. Adorkable.
Reeciez chapter 106 . 10/24/2014
I will accept your apology cause I'm so freakin happy there was an update! I figured that you were doing what you were doing and that sounded confusing didn't it? I'll try again. I figured that you were going over things and planning everything out. Ironing out kinks, checking to see if things overlap and what have you. I'm soooo happy you're back on track and ready to continue.

Oh. My. Golly. Gosh.
What is going on with Lionel? I want to say I'm worried about him but honestly I'm not cause as he said it's only a dream and his corporal body is with Judith so he should be fine. Unless Wiseass Eliam found a way to poke Lionel from afar and decided to control him with scare tactics which in that case I'm oddly heart wrenched. What I'm actually worried about is that hand being Luke's last gift to Lionel. Not like seeing the way a friend died is a gift but if this is really him showing Lionel his body then it would save them the trouble of going to find him even though they know they aren't ready to handle Eliam. This review has become very long. I'm glad you're updating again!
Jacks Ace chapter 105 . 9/28/2014
I can imagine an AU where he's (his name hasn't been mentioned for so long I've forgotten what it is "") a foreign diplomat of a distant kingdom in a weakened state that's in danger of all out war with King Eliam the Wise of the kingdom Knowledgeia (I suck at naming places, I know...Doll house?) xD
The Orange Cow chapter 105 . 9/20/2014
So, seeing as how falling down a pit has yet to ever actually kill anything in all of fiction, here's betting that Hespet's body will be back later. I'm gonna guess that Lionel will use the gift on it.
The Orange Cow chapter 104 . 9/20/2014
Well, it finally happened. It's incredible that not a single one of them thought that maybe they should take some kind of defensive measure before they conked out or walked off, but Judith...

I don't know why she's bragging about Eliam underestimating her. This blunder is making it very difficult for me to have faith in her competency. Even if she is an apprentice, this is basic. Like, day one of Hunting 101. Heck, this was probably the first question on the application for prospective hunters. The one they use to tell if the applicant has any hope of making the cut, ever.

I'm not really trying to just pick on Judith; they all deserve credit for this incredible(i.e. challenging my suspension of disbelief) failure. It's just that she's constantly touting herself as a badass 1337 hunter. That's fine, but if a character's going to do that, they have to follow through! And if they don't, it needs to be rubbed in their face.

Anywho, hopefully Simon manages to find a good snack out there; Rik should probably get something to eat also. Speaking of Rik, I wonder how much of him making that recovery had to do with Lionel sitting a few feet away?

I haven't done this in a few chapters, so it's time for a wild prediction about things to come. Here's betting that Eliam uses the pin on Luke, then releases him to act as a sleeper agent who will betray them at a crucial moment. You heard it here first, folks!
The Orange Cow chapter 103 . 9/20/2014
Called it.
pop-thatbubble chapter 105 . 9/19/2014
Man, I just have a feeling the order will be mosconstructed and the power accidentally misused ! Please don't do that to us! THIS IS EXCITING I hope Luke will be okay and Rik too...
Carzilla888 chapter 105 . 9/19/2014
Everything you do is so cool, I think you're super cool. I know this might be strange but can we be friends I'm just so taken by your amazing story that I've become a little obsessed with you. I mean how did you manage such a well written, well thought out story such as this one? I never read a story where I loved all the characters and they fit so well into the plot, like everyone had a part to play. I really really love your story like I just finished it all today and then you surprise me with an update and I nearly fainted out of joy. I love Lionel, Morden, Simon, Rik, Luke and Judith they're all so epic I also love Morden's ex boyfriend I forgot his name but he's funny too. YOu just have such an awesome way of highlighting the good, and the bad of each character. Almost makes me wish I could be in Lionels shoes or at least be their friends lol. BUt by all means I support you one thousand percent so please keep going with this awesome story but take your time and don't rush. I want each chapter to be good and to your liking. I know that if you take your time the chapter is bound to be absorbing and epic. Which is what I love.
LostToYourInsanity chapter 105 . 9/19/2014
Ooh Lionel has a gift! Lol. I wonder what he will do with it! You're such an amazing writer! You are the God of Cliffhangers lol! Loved the chapter, cant wait till next week!
Reeciez chapter 105 . 9/19/2014
This is a game changer! Thank you sooooo much Hiraani, this opens the door to sooo many possibilities. It doesn't mean everything is gonna be fixed but they at least have a chance to do something now. If I were Lionel, I'd tell Eliam to sleep or loose the ability to use all things demonic or magical or whatever. No magic string or mind speach for him. Goodness knows if the gift is even powerful enough for that sort of thing.
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