|Reviews for The Crypt Under Shadow Avenue|
| Guest chapter 50 . 3/1
| jeremy1555 chapter 5 . 2/10
Well done, and although obviously just a filler chapter it was a good chapter none the less.
| jeremy1555 chapter 4 . 2/10
Wow very well done, I think the crazy guy could have been saved for as a main character for the story but still very good, a lot o this I never would have thought of and its so simple, very well done.
| jeremy1555 chapter 3 . 2/10
Great chapter, this story is more interesting than scary to be honest, but I still love it. Definitly the best story I've ever read on Fictionpress so far.
| jeremy1555 chapter 2 . 2/9
Amazing chapter, Modern is so nice, I'd forgive him and even allow him to kill, as long as he didn't kill me of course. I now see why this story is so popular, its very well made.
| jeremy1555 chapter 1 . 2/9
Good first chapter I am liking this story so far and there are over 100 chapters, which just by the shear number of chapters interests me. I am excited to see how this story rolls out.
| xxKillMexx chapter 4 . 1/9
aawww simon sounds sweet even though he is 95% maniac
| Maeve Selene chapter 106 . 12/17/2014
I really love your story it's amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter xxx
| paradisefalls chapter 106 . 12/8/2014
Hi there! Can I just say that you've done an amazing job of writing this story? I mean, 106 chapters! Unbelievable! And to think that the quality of work never went down a notch... Wow. Impressive. You have no idea how pleased I am with the plot of the story and the character development - it's all just absolutely brilliant.
Now, when are you going to update? I can see the last time you did was around two months ago. You've got such a large audience waiting for you to produce more fabulous work, and I'm hoping you do immediately! Of course, if there's some issue or anything, I'm sure we can all wait it out, but please, I'm begging you, post a new chapter soon! (preferably before my birthday - 01.24)
| SeaBrittleStar chapter 106 . 11/15/2014
I hope you update soon. I really enjoy this story and would love to see how it ends. I noticed someone wrote a review saying that the quality went down after Ch. 80 and that you should stretch the story out more.
I don't agree per say; I think some of your chapters seem a little rushed and might benefit from more time and TLC, but I wouldn't say they're bad. Also this story is already very long and I think if you do expand more, then maybe do it as a series. Wrapping up the Eliam storyline and Lionel/Simon storylines would be enough for this book imo
| Guest chapter 105 . 11/11/2014
Please update. I wrote a whole long review for the chappie 106 but I accidentally deleted it before I posted it Loooool. But basically this story is too amazing and a love the couple and group dynamics especially simonxlionel. Their just too cute. I'm so looking forward to you updates. Every Friday right? Lol
| aynaarah chapter 106 . 11/11/2014
Nice.. until around chapter 80 I find everything so intense.. the language is rich in expressions.. and you have such a way of surprising things.. action an gestures.. simple gestures but feeling so natural and giving the characters another dimension.. ..sadly I feel it kinds of gets diluted now towards 100 (no expressions, no gestures, foreseeable events)..
As I said intense.. my opinion.. you should take your time.. you don't have to end it...
Eliam doesn't have to be the greatest and final evil.. you ca go on easily for another 100 chapters.. other evils can appear.. couples can develop.. what about Morden and Rik making a coven/pack... interacting with still other covens/packs.. Lionel wising up.. and I understand that the Shadow Avenue is the center.. but you can make it headquarters and explore the realm a bit more.. there is still the vampire Hespet.. and the Avalon hunters.. and hunters organization in general.. and so many other doors to the crypt and the old dwellers there before Eliam.. and a Noir mysterious heritage.. and Lionel.. he was an independent teenager and now he's rather a crying and angsty one.. he needs other dimensions too.. you can still build a lot.. or.. end it here and start a book two..
Of course it is all about you and what kind of conclusions you want the reader to draw.. I am happy there will actually be ones.. like maybe what the true strength is.. and the weak powerful hero.. though I have nothing against if this hero grows other strengths too..
Thank you for your story!
| Guest chapter 106 . 11/7/2014
More more more! Omg cannot stop reading! XD
| fairychild chapter 106 . 11/7/2014
i have to admit... this is completely amazing... I started reading this as a bit of a bedtime story... Didn't sleep a wink, but staying up to finish was totally worth it... Will be waiting impatiently for your next update though... :D
| Jacks Ace chapter 106 . 11/4/2014
YOU'RE ALIVE 8'DD