|Reviews for The Crypt Under Shadow Avenue|
| heavensentskysky chapter 71 . 11/30/2013
oh no Lionel! I can't to see what happens next :)(:
| Deb chapter 71 . 11/29/2013
How could you end the chapter there!? :0 lol, I look forward to the next update! :)
| The Orange Cow chapter 71 . 11/29/2013
I'm going to miss NaNoWriMo. :'(
What a cliffhanger! I'm not going to even bother speculating on how this will turn out. That crypt, though...
This chapter brings up a lot of interesting questions. What is the story behind the crypt? Eliam mentioned living in the general area a long time ago; might he be related to its history? So much seems to come back to him...
Were the doors sealed when the Noirs moved in, or did Mrs. Noir seal them afterward? Or maybe Mr. Noir? I don't think many details about him have been revealed yet, so who knows what capabilities he may have had. If they've been shut and likely unopened, how does Morden know that the crypt has only six rooms, and isn't a larger complex? What's inside the room with the black door? It is a crypt, so maybe some kind of remains? If it's really as toxic as it appears, Lionel might not be getting a first hand look any time soon. Hopefully Morden or somebody else in the know will feel like sharing.
Speaking of the room, what could Simon have been trying to do in there that got him killed? Something for Morden, apparently? And why is Lionel sensitive to it when Luke isn't? Maybe because of spending time around so many oddities, maybe something else? And what about Judith? Will she feel duty bound to do something about this little hotspot of bad mojo? That was a nice little moment she had with Lionel, by the way.
Will I stop asking so many questions? Yes?
I meant to say in the last review(forgot), but it's great to hear the project is still a thing! It's so cool that you're doing it. You mentioned that you hoped to have it done by the end of the story. If you don't mind revealing(and if you do, that's perfectly fine!), how far along would you say the story is?
As always, thanks so much for the update!
| Frol chapter 71 . 11/29/2013
OH! The Crypt! The Crypt Under Shadow Avenue! I'd forgotten about that. Seems like something big is going on down there. Super excited for the next chapter, and super excited to see more art from you on tumblr!
| KitsuneQueen chapter 71 . 11/29/2013
Every time I see you've updated I squeal and run to my room to see it, my family thinks I've gone crazy. I love this chapter but god I hate cliff hangers.
| mittelan chapter 71 . 11/29/2013
you are the queen of cliffhangers lemme tell you.
| Demicoeur chapter 70 . 11/27/2013
WEEEGGFHHHHHH *wails and claws the walls like Cosmogirl Simon does* Even though I am privvy to plot information I am still like "WOAHSHIT WHAT IS GONNA HAPPEN" and then I'm like "wait I know the answers to the questions I seek" but IT DOESN'T MATTER I want more chapters.
I lurve Rik and Simon and Gertrude and even Mr. Whiner-boy Morden. Also this is really awesome so fully expect me to brag about it to other friends and spread it around MUAHAHAHA.
| SmileyfaceGurl chapter 70 . 11/27/2013
Why do you do this to me?!
| The Orange Cow chapter 70 . 11/27/2013
While Judith and group were discussing contingency plans, once again I couldn't help but wonder what she was thinking. It's not that her words and her actions don't line up; they do. It's just, is there anything more? Is she secretly getting comfortable around everyone? Is she actually planning to call every hunter within a fifty mile radius down on them, regardless of the rescue outcome? I guess it's a moot point, seeing as how the operation did fail. She's made her intentions crystal clear in that regard.
And oh boy. I wasn't actually expecting it to go down like that. Some kind of hiccup in the plan, but not this level of catastrophe. If Judith was indeed serious about calling in backup, and no one else stops her, things are about to get a lot more complicated.
| Frol chapter 70 . 11/27/2013
Ughhhh these cliffhangers will be the death of me. How dare you :(((
| Reeciez chapter 70 . 11/26/2013
I'll just go kill myself now…
NOT BEFORE I KILL YOU!
No, I'll just go cry in a corner.
No. Simon, why!?
| Deb chapter 70 . 11/26/2013
oh my, this is getting exciting :D so looking forward to the next chapter!
| Demicoeur chapter 49 . 11/26/2013
You've killed me. I'm dead. I am lying in bed trying not to wake up your parents with mad laughter because of Cosmogurl Simon. Fucking hell. "Bronze tones" - I can't handle it hahahahahahahahajahahahajrbejfneksnfiekejfd fuck. - love, your stupid roommate
| The Green Eye chapter 70 . 11/26/2013
OMG Simon don't run away! Lionel's just trying to help! Haha awesome chapter! But lol you always leave us waiting on tenterhooks for the next chapter! :D
| NYXXIA chapter 69 . 11/26/2013
THANKS SO MUCH, WOOT! GO Lionel! :3 Bring our baby Simon back! xD I have a feeling this story will past 200 chapters. :3 It's not a bad feeling though. 333