|Reviews for The Crypt Under Shadow Avenue|
| Lara Madeline Night chapter 86 . 2/28
Poor Rik, to find out that his family was killed just so he could be a lab rat for Eliam...I kinda hate that guy now, I mean killing beings just for experiments? Crule.
| Siri Catriona chapter 85 . 2/27
BTW congrats on reaching eighty chapters. Ill page again when we reach 95!
| Siri Catriona chapter 85 . 2/27
AAAAAANND done rereading.
Good. Okay, I've got everything straight in my head now. Cool.
HOW ARE YOU SO GOOD AT WRITING. ITS SERIOUSLY NOT FAIR. WHENEVER I TRY WRITING ABOUT THIS KIND OF THING I ALWAYS MANAGE TO SCREW UP SO HOW CAN YOU DO IT RIGHT!?
Please continue... Looking forward to tomorrow... Hope everything's alright on your end... Meh. Bye!
| Siri Catriona chapter 41 . 2/25
Ah, memories. Re reading Crypt. I almost forgot how good the plot was - well, I won't be making that mistake again. Good luck writing the next chap!
| The Orange Cow chapter 85 . 2/25
So many new questions! Most of them about Eliam!
This chapter really makes me question how much we really know about Eliam's contract. Judith mentioned that these kinds of deals may have more than one clause. Might that be the case here? Also, the point Luke brought up is interesting; it kind of changes the game if Eliam's defaulted. Then again, why would he keep his mouth sewn shut if that were the case... So much to find out!
Then there's the fact that he bailed. Why did he do that? Worried about a confrontation with the gang? Running from something else? At this point, I'm not even sure how to start theorizing about what's going on.
Anywho, I'm very excited about the next chapter! Thanks for posting!
| C chapter 85 . 2/22
Simon is all better! YAY! I truly enjoy the way you create such great characters and stories. The urge to find out *what* Eliam is after (I suspect he wants possession of Lionel's body as a new, younger vessel, possibly but they're just theories), even though its unfortunate to find out that he's not who he seems. Alas, its always the too-good-to-be-true, ever helpful guardians you've got to look out for. But back to point; you have a great way of engaging your readers, making us want to come back again, and again to find out each and every new development of the story. I really love how you've developed Lionel now: his internal growth and awakening awareness and maturity. For a while, I found myself upset with Lionel for his naivety, and inadvertent selfishness and thoughtlessness for his friends, and I kept hoping that he would come to realize these inhibitions, and grow within them to become a better person. How you had him do so over the course of the story (and not right away) really brings a sense of believable progression to his character development. You do this exceptionally well with all of your characters! Lastly, I think Judith is just super awesome. Please keep her around. And Luke. I adore Luke and hope to see some more development from him as he finds his place within his new family.
On a side note, I love your story "PunchKick" and I hope you have not planned on abandoning it. Devlin is such a little hellion. I picture Simon's physicality plus Judith's searing personality when I read about him.
| iloveyousomuch chapter 85 . 2/21
thINGS ARE GETTING INTENSE OHMYGOD I AM SOO READY FOR THIS NEXT CHAPTER
ALSO - THIS CHAPTER WAS FANTASTIC! I LOVE, LIKE, EVERY CHAPTER!
| SallieBear chapter 5 . 2/21
His mum still scares me o.o
| SallieBear chapter 4 . 2/21
Awe Simon is awesome
| SallieBear chapter 3 . 2/21
Simon is so cuteeeeeeee omg like totally
| SallieBear chapter 2 . 2/21
His mum creeps me out ZOMG
| SallieBear chapter 1 . 2/21
I love it already, ZOMG, I bet it gets even scarier from here, I can't wait to read it
| Guest chapter 85 . 2/21
...Yeah, I bet that half of the readers are asking themselves the same thing.
I mean, Eliam? Where are you? Come out... Now.
Love this story and Simon in perticular.
P.s. Judith... Judith. How can somebody be so mean and so not-mean at the same time?
Love your characterization Bye
| Lara Madeline Night chapter 85 . 2/21
I recently found this story, like a few days ago.
It was just SO hard to think about school with this on my mind! I mean the plot itself is so interesting, and I had less than...like 2 hours to read per day because of school, homeworks, and my own story, and I finally finished it and am up to date. Can't wait till next week when you update though.
I have to say my favourite character so far would be either Mama, Rik, or Judith. Mama cause...well she's Mama, the crazy yet loving, insane woman who thinks Lionel is her actual son.
Rik cause of his personality, and Judith for all her remarcs (I just laughed for like 5 minutes at her remarc with Rik's Christmas sweater. ).
I really wanna see Eliam getting killed, and Simon having his birthday party, he deserves one after everything he went trough...
Anyway, I am really looking forward to read the next chapter, hopefully school will be out of my way till next week (highly unlikely though, teachers pile up work on me...).
| pride the arrogant chapter 85 . 2/20
You know, sometimes I forget this isn't a published book.