|Reviews for The Crypt Under Shadow Avenue|
| i love you chapter 83 . 2/7
omg omg omg omg this chapter yessss we finally have some answers! and everything judith's saying makes sense and i can't wait to see what part eliam has to part...he has been rather suspicious lately...
ANYWAY, i seriously love your characters and this plot like omgg i have so much love for it i'm actually really liking judith's character!
see you next friday!
| mistouuu chapter 1 . 2/4
HELLO THERE..I've been reading your story for quite a while and I decided it's time I wrote you a review...First things first I 'm seriously in LOVE with your story and I admire your writing skills to say the least..I've read a lot of stories but nothing is as exceptional as yours...The concept and the progrssion of the story are just amazing and as for the characters each of them is unique and beautifully developed it's really easy to get attached to them ...They are all awesome and it's exciting to see them react to the plot twists..As far as I;m concerned I really like you bringing Judith in the picture as she is the only female and it's interesting to see her interact with the other and it's also good to have a female-badass point of view...Rik and Morden ohhhh, I suspected something would happen between them but I did NOT see it coming SO SOON it was a huge surprise..I;m also really grateful that Simon is back to normal .. it was haertbreaking to see him conflicted..As for Lionel he has been my favorite since the beggining and I believe it's nice for him to have Luke in the group, who is as human as a hman can be...Anyway I want to just say THANK YOU for creating and continuing the story i's a real masterpiece..KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
| Sstl chapter 82 . 2/3
Oohoohooh meeeeeee! I definitely saw Rik/Morden coming! Lots of ust, those two. But I'm not complaining. They're cute together:3
| The Orange Cow chapter 82 . 2/3
Le sigh. Nothing against Morden, but you could do better, Rik!
I wouldn't say it was certain, but this pairing was one I've seen as likely. It's been clear for a while now that Lionel would either be with Simon or Morden. Simon has had a lot of focus for a while now; there have also been a few little references here and there hinting toward him being with Lionel. Despite all that, Morden has always been a strong contender because he was the first one introduced. Taking all that into account, it made sense that Rik would probably be with whoever didn't go with Lionel. Since Rik and Morden got together first, though, it's a pretty safe bet who's ending Lionel will get. Of course, I suppose there is another option. Dare I say it, harem ending?
The part with Lionel and Rik was a little confusing to me. What exactly was Lionel angry about and why did Rik need to apologize? I get that Lionel is in many ways the center of the group, but how does that make it so that everyone needs to check up with him about all aspects of their lives? This wasn't some big conspiracy that was being covered up, it was a private circumstance between two autonomous people. It would be understandable if it was just a small pettiness of Lionel's; people tend to act weird about romantic issues, even when they aren't directly involved. That fact that Rik went along with it gave it it validation, as if to say, "Hey, this is a perfectly acceptable and correct way for a person to act."
Again, I don't have a problem with Lionel acting that way, exactly. A few small flaws here and there could actually do his character good, overall. It's that the universe treats him as being in the right that I find strange.
Definitely looking forward to the conversation with Judith. She always has such interesting things to say! There are such a wide range of topics it could be about, I don't know where to start. No matter how it goes, it will surely be good read. Can't wait for it!
| guest chapter 82 . 2/3
holy shit, i knew there was something fucking going on when rik and morden went out of simon's room and they came back with rik wearing that gay ass sweater. but jesus christ i never knew that rik/morden would become canon so soon!
| Guest chapter 82 . 2/2
I DID NOT see that coming! But I loved it! They're going to be a great couple. I really really never want this story to end it keeps my fridays happy
| heavensentskysky chapter 82 . 1/31
Slash finally! I actually didn't see Rik/Morden, but I like it better than Lionel/Morden :) I think my fav would be Simon/Lionel...great chapter, can't wait for more!
| Thatrandomfan chapter 82 . 1/31
pAIRINGS?! PaiRINGS! I am so exited whoop! Okay, I have to admit I suspected rik and dear little mordy around three chapters ago but, hey, bromance works in weird ways so I wasn't sure. Lionel and Simon (so CUTE!) I didn't consider at all until my friend (I got her into the story and now she loves it to death)(her URL is something about warriors and their brave hearts or something along those lines) said she thought they went well together and I'm just like "CRAP! THEY DO!" And so yeah this chapter was great Lionel deserves a break. He did super good I'm so proud.
| The Green Eye chapter 82 . 1/31
Loved the chapter! And the rik/Morden fluff. Can't wait for the Simon/Lionel fluff (wink wink) :D
| ohmYGOD chapter 82 . 1/31
AHHHHHHHHHH OH MY GOD MORDEN AND RIK FREAKING OH MY GOD I'M SO HAPPY AJSDFKGHJIOSDKFNGHJFSIDSDFHDAHFJAWSEKDSKLANJ YOU MAKE ME HAPPY, DEAR AUTHOR. VERY HAPPY. now if only the simon/lionel thing happened but STILL THIS CHAPTER WAS PERFECT OH MY GOD I HAVE SO MUCH LOVE FOR YOU
| Faradays chapter 82 . 1/31
Eh, I'm not sure how to explain, but they did seem to fit the "bickering couple" routine. I'm very curious as to how they're gonna act after they sort their things out.
I'm still wondering if LionelxSimon is platonic?
| Vallucast chapter 82 . 1/31
I knew it since simon being all cosmogirl! And that lionel getting closer to simon.. I'm waiting the next hint tehehe
| SilverRed chapter 82 . 1/31
I hoped for this back before Rik was even in the story :D. I hoped it would be SimonxLionel since I started reading back when this story was 13 chapters long and I've heard about the whole "Boy pulls Girl's pigtails to get Girl to pay attention to Boy," and Rik and Morden have been paying a lot of attention to each other, so I think i did call it earlier. JudithxLuke was/is kinda obvious since Judith was introduced.
Also, in writing this review I've come to the conclusion that you are Excellent with names. My first few stories had very ... similar names - most of the main characters names stared with the letter K (Kin, Kale, Killian, etc).
In anticipation for the next bit, I'm guessing that the Hunters that Judith works with will get involved and Lionel and Co. will have to prove that they, A) know what they're doing and B) Are not a threat to anyone, with a few big characters believing them and the obligatory racist asshole/ father-of-murdered-family who wants to kill Morden, Simon, and Rik simply because they are what they are. Possible twists include Lionel's mother being one of the Hunters (hence why she travels so much) and the Hunters being convinced to help get the evil Amulet off of Mama and Hespet somehow framing Morden for some deaths resulting in Rik saving he day and fair vampire's heart. :D
Also I am thinking of doing some Fan Art with the characters from the story, I'm asking if that would be ok and would you like to see them when they are done?
Next Friday cannot come sooner, SilverRed. :D
| raytondaite chapter 82 . 1/31
I loved this chapter! I'd been feeling a Rik/Morden pairing for some time, but Simon/Lionel I did not see coming at all!
| SmileyfaceGurl chapter 82 . 1/31
I saw it a mile away. Like when Rick was first introduced. That long ago. It was confirmed when Simon and Morden were stuck in their house and Simon was all 'Morden's Ideal guy is Funny but serious when he has to be' (Something like that) and my first thought was Rick. It was just meant to be. To be honest, if they weren't together by the end of this story I would have just...died. You have saved my life. Thank you.