Reviews for It Was Just Another Night
Travis C. Eckert chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
Saw this on your profile part and seemed interesting. Wow really happened, I bet you quit your job as the final line gives me that impression.
Daffodil Elizabeth chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
Wow. This is really kind of sad, when you think about it. Anyway, I love the gritty sort of language here. It fits just right. (For some reason a robbery seems like it needs "gritty" language.)
Sakura Taking chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
This is an interesting topic to pursue. Although I think that this is well written, it might have smoother flow if it was written in a different format. Perhaps as an essay or as fragmented lines. You've done a good job at keeping the reader's attention through to the end. Keep up the good work!