|Reviews for Just Want to Hold Her in My Hand|
| sunday night sky chapter 1 . 10/13/2006
I found this quite crude, but strangely intriguing. not at all what i was expecting. i sort of liked it! keep writing :D
PS. I would read one of your stories but they are SO long! I don't have time! I will eventually, but not right now :P
| felicia13 chapter 1 . 10/4/2006
Unexpected. I wasn't think it would go there, but it did.
I found it quite vulgar, which isn't always a bad thing, but it was just ... distasteful here.
BUT, there were parts I loved. "And she is the seductress of my soul." Powerful. It was completely ruined by the line after, but ... what can you do?
Yeah. I really don't like it much. No offense to you or anything. It think it's a taste ... one which I don't have, apparently.
Thanks for the review, though. Yay brokendream21! YAY!