|Reviews for Smile and Show Your Broken Teeth|
| MidnightStar005 chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
This is beautifully done! I really enjoyed reading it. 10/10!
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| QuixoticQuetzal chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
I enjoyed this one. It's very well written. I really liked the title. It made me smile because we all fall down sometimes, but it's best to just laugh it off.
| Sakura Taking chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
The title to this poem is very captivating. The poem itself is very amusing, and it made me smile. The wording and descriptions are truly brilliant. Well done!
| sunday night sky chapter 1 . 10/13/2006
i like the title of this piece, it caught my attention! well worded, i really enjoyed reading it. The only bit I didnt like is the phrase 'head's meat'. I don't know why :S But the last line is great :D keep writing
| brokendreams21 chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
Surprisingly, this poem made me smile. I don't know if it was meant to be, but I was slightly amused. This was smartly written and I really liked it. Good job!