Reviews for Smile and Show Your Broken Teeth
MidnightStar005 chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
This is beautifully done! I really enjoyed reading it. 10/10!

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QuixoticQuetzal chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
I enjoyed this one. It's very well written. I really liked the title. It made me smile because we all fall down sometimes, but it's best to just laugh it off.
Sakura Taking chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
The title to this poem is very captivating. The poem itself is very amusing, and it made me smile. The wording and descriptions are truly brilliant. Well done!
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 10/13/2006
i like the title of this piece, it caught my attention! well worded, i really enjoyed reading it. The only bit I didnt like is the phrase 'head's meat'. I don't know why :S But the last line is great :D keep writing
brokendreams21 chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
Surprisingly, this poem made me smile. I don't know if it was meant to be, but I was slightly amused. This was smartly written and I really liked it. Good job!