Reviews for Your Sickness
MatthewS.D. hula hoop chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Poignantly brilliant. Fantastic
lijuan chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
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beautiful poet chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
Awsome poem i new here check out my first poem
SummerSmilez chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
Aww, this poem is so sad, but it's really good. Keep up the good work.
Erma Buckles chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
So sad and sweet! You should fix the grammar and spelling, because the mistakes take away from the beauty of the poem.
Double Plus Special chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
Very realistic. I particularly like "The doctors

and the shrinks

They say it’s a disease

That you can’t control it sometimes


One thing, "Oh, its could go on forever," sounds like there's a typo in there somewhere, or something.
Tipped chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
Aw... I know how this is. At such a young age, it is really hard to go through. And I think you captured that, really well. The voice had a sense of innocence to it, that gave it all the more meaning. I enjoyed this. Thank you for the review.

we-were-sumn-more chapter 1 . 10/4/2006
Oh...hiatus...thes tory behind it is so sad!i hop ethis wasnt based on actual experience..that would be horrible!great imagery, strong emotions, another great piece!haha-DEE
An-Author-At-Heart chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
Wow, very strong emotions, very dark. It's good how you described a situation so raw and painful in poetry. Very good.