|Reviews for Finish Line|
| first-casualty-of-war chapter 1 . 1/22/2007
This was a very exciting piece, and very well written. I could relate to some of it and I'm sure many people who play sports can, and that made it even more enjoyable. Sweet read and good job )
| aka Providence chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
Good story, you capture the feel of winning a race very well, it's interesting. lol, the total word count is 8.
BTW, if you get the chance, read my story, Angel's Halo 1: Devil's Rising and drop a review. Much appreciated!
| Valandil93 chapter 1 . 10/5/2006