Reviews for Parallax
beyond.that.horizon chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
"i don't see in color-i feel color"

gawd, effin beautiful!
Euphoric Love chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
If only stars didn't burn away so easily.

And here I sit going "Damn, I wish I wan't identifying with the star." Thanks for making me think. Can't say I'm terribly fond of personal puddle pauses, but at least this parallax gives a brief perspective of the other half of "my love."
Violet Marx chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
I just want to eat your metaphors up, they're so fantastic! I'm constantly trying to work those into my poetry, and you inspire me with yours. I'm always striving to come up with ones that are as great as yours are!

Also, I've been writing some new suff up, I want you to see them if you haven't already.

Violet