Reviews for With or without
Marit chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
hey lief,

mooi gedicht, vraag me af of er een couplet voor mij is of dat ik het verkeerd begrepen heb...?

kus your friend
Not Quite Dry Eyed chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
Wow. That one struck a cord. Mainly because I know I would do the same thing for all of my friends and my sisters (I would bare the pain of the world so they could be spared all of the hurt). Great job on this one. I also like the style in it (spacing between letters and b.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l). Keep writing forever and always!

simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/26/2006
I like this poem... its sad and sweet in a twisted way... i like the ending especially.. great write
apromptedpoet chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
yeahi cried. that's all i gotta say. haha.i love it babe, and i would definitely do the same for you.((i know we haven't talked in ages, my MSN's down))i hope you're doing okay!much love-suicidal_greeting
QueenVixta chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
Great poem! I liked it a lot, beautifully and powerfully written!Vikki.
Hole Buddies chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
this is really really really good, i liked it mucho - geena
AllyCred chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
OMG, That was beautiful, i can't believe how much i connected with that, its just so raw and exposed, pure and honest, i love it one of your best pieces. Def going on favs:-

Love Alex

P.S.~~ Thanks for the review. I'm doing okay, getting by, you know? How about you, r u okay? xx
Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
Cool, one of the best i've read tonight.

I like your editing style as well.

Keep it real,

poemkitten7 chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
Wow, this is amazing. Very original and clever. I love the whole concept of how you love them with or without the all those things. D Keep writing! ~Sara