|Reviews for The Queen of Dares|
| J E Doherty chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
Love it. You kept the Point of view constant and handled Maora's internal monologue well. You didn't clutter the dialogue with he said she said and you managed to keep it very clear who was speaking right through the story.
Regards Jeff Doherty
| nothere3 chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
It's good, just proofread!