| Reviews for Beyond Sight |
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   blackberry33 chapter 1 . 12/25/2006 Dude, I pretty much don't like stories like these but this is...good. Wow, I'm already loving it! Great writing with loads of details! heh, Leon's accident reminds me of Quest for Camelot (the animated movie!) hehehe...great writing so you better update soon! |
| Eccentric chapter 1 . 12/2/2006 Well that was pretty awesome ). Its quite interesting. However, the only thing I would suggest it putting break lines where the POV changes. It gets a little confusing when you jump back and forth. Thats it. You rock. -Jackie |
| Shedoesntevencare chapter 1 . 10/23/2006 AW leaon is so adorable! the girl seems to be a key character...I daresay this is a great story keep it up! |
| R.I.P.sanitee chapter 1 . 10/2/2006 MORE!*hass nervy spasm*ack, so good, I am dying!YOU'RE KILLING ME HERE! |