D: i just what why why just ugh do you ugh.

GODDAMN STOP SUBTLY (or not so subtly) HINTING ABOUT THEIR IMPENDING BREAKUP.
JUST STAHP IT.

If this is the fucking end I am going to cry. As if I'm not crying already.

Finleigh is sweet!

This is great! Are you ever gunna update this again? D;

most amazing story ever.

Well, I admit I'm a bit disappointed. I suppose the cheerleader will be a one-off character, as the principal may be, but to me they seemed . . . rather stereotypical. It's true that I can't reasonably expect a fully-fleshed out character every time, but I hope to avoid the obvious in my reading. On another note, I doubt that the principal would (1) simply not punish the girl or even talk with her on the physical violence and disruption she caused, (2) assign a random though well-intentioned student to peer-meditate one of the most troublesome students in his school, or (3) have the authority to do (2). It feels like a sloppy plot device meant to force interaction. I don't know much of anything about the public school system, but I don't think a principal could or would do that. Finleigh's reaction seems a bit odd in that at first he nods with indifference and seems totally calm, but then reacts violently and hatefully. Did you forget to delete one of those reactions or is he slow to react?

Not a particularly happy person, this narrator, but that's not expected or required. A rich narrative, very modern-teenage-girl-with-precision. No giant exposition dumps or revealing all the secrets at once (which I appreciate), and lots of little details to make the visual side entertaining. She's right, first days back are pretty boring. Pers'lly, I like the rubric reading - makes me imagine a fun school year before reality hits.

Interesting beginning. The cynicism and defensiveness is enhanced by the OCD issue, which I must admit I don't think about too often as a huge problem and was forced to reconsider while reading. You have an interesting premise, so I'm gonna keep reading.

Gosh.

It's so freakin' sad.

That pain is just all too real.

I hope somehow there's a happy ending to this story.

Update soon.

this storys really good.

her dad should go to hell.

please update again soon

Ah, I'm so glad to see that you've updated this story because it is by far one of my personal favorites. However, I can't say that I completely understood everything that occurred in this chapter, especially in the end. I don't know it the last scene occurred much after the previous one or what. I hope that the next chapter will clear things up. Things are grim between Fin and Senya. Oh, I soo hope for their happily ever after. I'll be completely crushed when they ultimately break up. Ah, I can barely express how I'm feeling after this chapter, haha. Until next time then! We'll see if I'm more articulate then.

O my gosh,I'm so glad you started updating the story, I missed your writing so much! haha well, although the storyline is a bit confusing, I think I get the gist of what is happening. I hope you continue to update!

I liked that. Seriously. It's been so long that I forgot your writing style. So deep and wonderful.

...Wow, that was a really great chapter!