Reviews for Where The Trees Had Angry Faces
temerity chapter 1 . 10/4/2006
Impressive :) You have a gift for word choice...some of the phrases weren't my style (such as those using parallel structure), but I love the imagery and ideas presented here.

Keep writing!
Moo Moo Chibi chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
Awesome! It can use more descriptive adjectives, but it was really really good!
Doodleflip chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
Great poem! Very mysterious, and very powerful. It's got some very strong imagery in it too- I particularly love this line "The sky was painted with shadow". This is the sort of poetry I love, keep up the good work!
sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
I have a strange obsession with trees (especially personified trees), so the title of this piece immediately grabbed me. And so did the language in this piece, particularly in the first stanza. I loved the line “the sky was painted with shadow.” In the second stanza, I felt you got a little too vague; I didn’t like the use of the words “somewhere” and “something” – I felt it was too indefinite. Overall, though, this was an enjoyable piece and I’m glad I took the time to read it. Keep up the good work!