Reviews for Breaking the Sidewalk |
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![]() ![]() ![]() "I jumped up and felt my whole body for holes or stabs I might’ve missed. With a grin, I stood up and wiped the street dust off myself.""Tony, or Johnny, whatever, threw a new wad of slimy, spit covered paper at my dirty hair, and I knew this was going to be a long day." Ha, oh man, those two parts were fun-eh! Haha. God, do you EVER think of a career for this thing? I mean, COME ON LETS FREAKIN' GO! I'm lucky enough to have my dad, but you could do it without any "connections". I could SO see this thing going places! God damn you rock to loud for my ears. Oh! Your story reminds me, I accidentally left a picture you drew me in the back of that Eragon book. It was a good book, its just that when Eragon and Brom were alone they talked too much and way too long. And... Ha, when Murtagh helped Ery-boy out I kept thinking, "Holy shit! They're gonna be gay lovers! He just lifted up his shirt! Ah! Oh man~! Murtagh waited for ery to visit him in his cell? LOVERS!" But yeah, ANYWAY... Thats all your fault with your cool gravitation crap... And Loveless... Ah! I love those shows... I feel like such a geek who's obssesed with anime and leaves to long of a comment. Xp... But anyway, ((Geez, do I EVER shut up? No wonder you're always annoyed with me!)) I didnt get to coloring it... Like you asked... I thought about it alot and looked at some pictures I HAD colered, and... It wasnt a pretty sight. I cant even color inside the damn lines! Oops. *slaps wrist* I cussed. But yeah, can you possibly give it back to me? I need it to complete my stalker shrine/altar of you that me, Fi-chan, and Ambar are trying so desperately to complete. So... Picture? Eh? *winks* Eh? *nudges* Great story! You should be like... A millonaire or something if you ever found the time to update.. Oh yeah... How is it that you can create new stories but can update your old ones? Hm... Thats something to ponder over...-/-; Sammie! Yeah, yeah, there's only one "i". |
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![]() ![]() ![]() oh... This looks good. I really, really wanna read more now! Keep up the great work! |