Reviews for My Apologies
Kylee M. Fowler chapter 1 . 12/26/2006
aww this is pretty cute! i think i should start writing poems when i need to apologize... :-)
sarah1491 chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
Whoa.. it's amazing!

-sarah
Travis C. Eckert chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
This is so heartwarming to me.
brokendreams21 chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
Um is all I have to say. (I'm joking.) Blah. I might have lost my taste for sad poems. I'm sorry. But it's true...Anyhow, apology not accepted. (Kidding.) The rhyming scheme was okay...and it's always okay to fall apart. Everyone has days so don't worry about it too much, 'kay? Always look up at the future, and forget dwelling in the past. Sure, the past is what makes you you, but the future is what is going to make the rest of your life.

Good job.
Lemon Sorbet chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
You could be more complicated with your rhyming; it's very basic. Also, work on your rhyming patterns so the syllables in each sentence add up. It's a good poem, keep it up! Lucyz
phantom-jedi chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
"Worries were longer as vile."

I think you might have a typo here. Is there supposed to be a "no" in front of longer?

A nice little poem. Keep writing.

phantom_jedi