Reviews for SCREAMS FAIL
eternalxxshadows chapter 1 . 11/6/2006
Whoa, I Love It!

It expresses everything perfectly in a flowing way!

You're an awesome writer, keep it up!
Chaos Apple chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
Hm. This poem has a lot of of direct imagery, but the phrasing seems slightly undeveloped.

A poem like this could provide an interesting look into someone's psyche-after all it's raw to the point of revelation. Maybe you face an uncomfortable choice coming up, choosing between something good and some thing you shouldn't do/know/see, but you're inclining to crawl further into the dark because you're feeling neglected or lonely or even desolate and hopeless.

Lmfao. Ok, I'll stop trying to analyze you! Just so you know, you're a good writer, and in the future I can see yo improving a lot. Almost everyone further developes with age.

Alice
mate.feed.kill.repeat chapter 1 . 10/4/2006
Hey you. I love your poetry already... and I've read like two! Yea so like the other dude said on the other poem... SPELL CHECK IS A GIRLIE'S BEST FRIEND! Well, besides me, of course. Lovez, STIXERZ.
Neurotic Consciousness chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
Good poem. It's interesting how sometimes one becomes so accustomed to darkness, that they will not seek the light... This poem expresses the sentiment well, I felt.