Reviews for Crimson Light
kaorayen chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
I love this. It does seem like a song to me, or, I think it would make a good song. I think you need another word that rhymes with crash, but otherwise I loved it, and I'd say a lot of people can relate to it too. Wonderful.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/13/2006
hm, pretty good, somehow the crashing/bashing didnt seem to fit into the context quite right. otherwise, good work

keep writing
sarah1491 chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
OMG Sneha! I love it!

Travis C. Eckert chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
Pretty good, your description of this is true.
brokendreams21 chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
I like the title...although I feel as though the word 'crimson' is sorta overused. *ducks from flying objects* I liked this one. It seemed more hopeful and that's what I like to see. Lalala. Rhyming was better. Some of the punctuation was unnecessary according to me. It sort of marred the flow. But other than that, it was still pretty. Good job!