What's the dirty message? I like reading them. ;)

Also, I forgot to say. During the reading of this fanfic, I noticed many misspellings of the words 'the' and 'she'. Perhaps if you fix them, the reading could be more enjoyable for other readers.

I came across this fanfic yesterday and I absolutely loved it!
I seldom read M rated fanfics, but the blurb really had me, so I just knew I had to read this.
The intense chemistry between Breck and Leana is so hot and captivating!
Is Chapter 13 really the end? Cause I'd love to read more!

AWESOME! I love this! its soooo emotinal and i like breck and leana's chemistry! This is so different for I read ALOT of fictionPress! woooaaa! hot too! PLZ UPDATE SOON LIKE THIS YEAR! LOL

Sorry about that but y comp is really messed up. Anyway, I do really like your story and I am enjoying the plotline and everything. Also I know that this story is a few years old but would it really hurt to go back and proof read? I mean, I may come of as a grammar snob but a few mistakes are okay, tolerable. Over twenty and all of them the same just gets on my nerves, it's like you have a problem with writing "the" like a normal person and it can get really tedious. Sorry for coming off as a completely rude bitch but this is my honest opinion and it

First of all can I just say that I really like your story and I am really enjoying the

this story is really good but it seriously reminds of the novel "Stolen". The part about the girl being kidnapped by the story starting at a coffee shop by the airport. The guy bringing her to his home but this is fucking awesome. Sorry for my language :P And the plots are different in this story as the your characters start falling in the novel,they didn't have sex but your characters did which is sexy :P Love the story

I really wish you finish this story, it's one of my favorites on fictionpress. I hope you get back to writing because it really is an amazing story so far :)

love it plz ud soon XD

I love the story. I almost stopped reading when I saw you were going to do a flashback. You executed it very well and it didn’t distract from the story too much. I’m very glad I gave it a chance. This was a great read. Thank you for sharing your writing.



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ah, it's such a bummer that this hasn't been updated in so long-it's so good! hopefully you pick it back up again!

love how this story is going, keep on going!

Ahh I can't believe you end it there! I was on a roll with reading it! D UPDATE SOON! ~Angela

loved it(:

update VERY soon

She is so stubborn! But I really like your story and I hope that all works out for them! By the way, is he the one who was sending her dirty text messages?