Reviews for Shadow of Doubt
okaymotherfucker chapter 1 . 5/27/2016
What's the dirty message? I like reading them. ;)
mikitastic chapter 13 . 8/10/2012
Also, I forgot to say. During the reading of this fanfic, I noticed many misspellings of the words 'the' and 'she'. Perhaps if you fix them, the reading could be more enjoyable for other readers.
mikitastic chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
I came across this fanfic yesterday and I absolutely loved it!
I seldom read M rated fanfics, but the blurb really had me, so I just knew I had to read this.
The intense chemistry between Breck and Leana is so hot and captivating!
Is Chapter 13 really the end? Cause I'd love to read more!
empress11690 chapter 13 . 6/3/2012
AWESOME! I love this! its soooo emotinal and i like breck and leana's chemistry! This is so different for I read ALOT of fictionPress! woooaaa! hot too! PLZ UPDATE SOON LIKE THIS YEAR! LOL
Seriously chapter 4 . 2/18/2012
Sorry about that but y comp is really messed up. Anyway, I do really like your story and I am enjoying the plotline and everything. Also I know that this story is a few years old but would it really hurt to go back and proof read? I mean, I may come of as a grammar snob but a few mistakes are okay, tolerable. Over twenty and all of them the same just gets on my nerves, it's like you have a problem with writing "the" like a normal person and it can get really tedious. Sorry for coming off as a completely rude bitch but this is my honest opinion and it
Seriously chapter 4 . 2/18/2012
First of all can I just say that I really like your story and I am really enjoying the
Duckie's Day chapter 13 . 1/15/2012
this story is really good but it seriously reminds of the novel "Stolen". The part about the girl being kidnapped by the story starting at a coffee shop by the airport. The guy bringing her to his home but this is fucking awesome. Sorry for my language :P And the plots are different in this story as the your characters start falling in the novel,they didn't have sex but your characters did which is sexy :P Love the story
gilbertdiaries chapter 13 . 12/31/2011
I really wish you finish this story, it's one of my favorites on fictionpress. I hope you get back to writing because it really is an amazing story so far :)
Vampireacademyrox chapter 13 . 6/15/2011
love it plz ud soon XD
Mia-Reviews chapter 13 . 5/28/2011
I love the story. I almost stopped reading when I saw you were going to do a flashback. You executed it very well and it didn’t distract from the story too much. I’m very glad I gave it a chance. This was a great read. Thank you for sharing your writing.

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A. Ranae chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
ah, it's such a bummer that this hasn't been updated in so long-it's so good! hopefully you pick it back up again!
deltaphi chapter 13 . 6/19/2009
love how this story is going, keep on going!
futureauthor852 chapter 13 . 3/14/2009
Ahh I can't believe you end it there! I was on a roll with reading it! D UPDATE SOON! ~Angela
CreativeChick233 chapter 13 . 2/1/2009
loved it(:

update VERY soon
MarieUnderSeige chapter 13 . 11/27/2008
She is so stubborn! But I really like your story and I hope that all works out for them! By the way, is he the one who was sending her dirty text messages?
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