Reviews for Shadow of Doubt
bianca08 chapter 12 . 8/9/2007
Phewie dude that was amazing stuff! It was written in a pleasntly unexpected way but such a good idea as it enables what happened in the past between leana and ryan/breck to be explored in detail. Almost genius, i have to say. It was hot without making breck/ryan(sorry i like to think of him as ryan lolz!)seem like a forceful jerk. Well i believe you achieved in this scene what you wanted when you first wrote the story. I felt i had a better understanding of both characters and this was not a sex scene pretending to be something else, which is great. Cant wait for more, as breck still has some more explaining to do...hehe. Cheers.
serendipity90 chapter 12 . 8/6/2007
omg dont tell me ure not cont this story?
ihrtbks chapter 12 . 7/29/2007
Oh wow...that totally changes their whole dynamic. But the way you told their story was...HOT.

victoia chapter 12 . 7/29/2007
oh my god... i love this story! all the little twists and turns its taking. can't wait to read more...
Phantom'sLuv chapter 12 . 7/28/2007
haha you're very welcome for the reviews. I'm glad to send them. This story is amazing! Please update again soon. VERY very very soon.

sunflowersing chapter 12 . 7/27/2007
That was hott! Update soon!

Sweet Child chapter 12 . 7/27/2007
That was cute. The two really belong together. Also, I guessed right! As well as at least five other reviewers *sob*. Just kidding. Anyway, I still didn't see wether the other part of my assumption was right. Next time, then? *Wiggles eyebrows*

Oh, and send my love and best wishes to Leana and Breck. When will the marriage be? :P
laelia chapter 3 . 7/26/2007
oh my.. she is kinda easy...
Sure as the Dawn chapter 12 . 7/26/2007
It was great! I liked the 'story-tellng' method. Very creative :)
Antonia Gardiner chapter 12 . 7/26/2007
Great chapter and I hope that you will post another one pretty soon. I have a question: How old is Breck and what is the age difference between him and Leana?
Just4Smiles chapter 12 . 7/26/2007
I really like this story, and so cannot wait for the next chapter. Update soon!
Phantom'sLuv chapter 4 . 7/22/2007
You gotta update this story. Its so good! PLEASE update this like now. Its too good to just abandon.

Phantom'sLuv chapter 6 . 7/18/2007
PLEASE update this story. I'm begging you, i gotta know what happens next!

sunflowersing chapter 11 . 7/17/2007
Oh. My. God. Update soon! That was a really emotional chapter. And will this guy have sex with her? Hmm...

Sweet Child chapter 11 . 7/10/2007
This is certainly different than the other stories here. It's really interesting to tell you the truth. Also, who wouldn't want to be kidnapped by a rich, handsome guy, who loves you. That is, if he isn't a psycho *laughs*

Well, the only thing I can say now is that I have some guesses about what's going on. They're probably wrong, but whatever. So, here goes. Don't laugh *flinches* but I think that Breck is the guy that Leana lost her virginity to. Because of the description you gave of him, and the way he pronounced Leanas' name. Also, I think that the thing on Brecks' forehead might be a scar. So, was I even close? Anyway, I hope you'll update soon, so I can see if I guessed right - which I probably didn't.
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