Reviews for Shadow of Doubt
Norma Porma Worma chapter 11 . 7/6/2007
continue plz this is hot
Sure as the Dawn chapter 11 . 7/4/2007
Wow. How mean. What a jerk. Can't wiat for your next update! ;D
Phantom'sLuv chapter 11 . 7/3/2007
Keep it up. I really really like this story. And I wanna know what hapens next. Update again soon! :)

bianca08 chapter 11 . 7/3/2007
that was an insightful how leana's high school self was portrayed...i really like...the emotions you portrayed seemd real like they could actually happen and one can relate to them...leana's sudden wish to be some kind of sexpot vixen is a little surprising but i suppose its because of what she went through...however as of right now you NEED to update soon cause this chapter was full of suspense we need to know more about breck and her past...i personally am suspecting that helpful guy to be breck...but that would mean he s older than her by a quite a bit rite? cant wait for the next...cheers
Antonia Gardiner chapter 11 . 7/3/2007
OMG! I think I know who the man in the alley is...he he he

Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!
prince of denmark chapter 11 . 7/2/2007
Gasp! Dun dun dun... I wanna know what happens next! Tee hee hee. *naughty, naughty* Issac is an arsehole! I would smack him all the way to mars!
ihrtbks chapter 11 . 7/2/2007
Isaac's a bastard. That was just mean. I understand why Leana would react like that. So is Breck the "man"?

Aerlinniel chapter 10 . 6/27/2007
I'm enjoying this extremely! Can't wait wait for more!
Antonia Gardiner chapter 10 . 6/24/2007
Very interesting chapter. I'm happy that I am getting to know more of Leana. Hopefully some Breck flashbacks will come up next.
bianca08 chapter 10 . 6/21/2007
heya! Okay i have to admit, when i first read the word 'flashback' i was kinda worried but after reading this chapter i actually found it a welcome change from breck and leana's llove-hate-ness or whatever it is keep them going on for too long tho, i dont think i can take the only that, but i have a feeling that the readers find out who breck is from her past, its going to be easier to like him, well for me at , suspense, haha at least ive figured out that breck isnt isaac..ryan maybe? Nice flashback overall and you chose a good time to introduce i said, we sort of need it to understand breck-i think. However the past leana's thoughts seem a little ambiguous on certain things..ah but forget it that doesnt distract from the story so dont worry. Cheers!
toxic-noodle725 chapter 10 . 6/21/2007
uhh so im guessing this flashbacks gonna be continued? well hurry up i wanna know who the stalker really is. the suspense is killing me...
drownyouout chapter 9 . 6/9/2007
good story here! that was a giant cliffhanger, i hope you update soon.
Seremela chapter 9 . 6/2/2007
Wow. Sexy. I like, and I'm also very curious as to how he knows her...
bianca08 chapter 6 . 5/30/2007
they re not allowing me to review chap 9 for some lame reason so i had to do it from here...i hope u still read this though...its regarding chapter about chap 9 now-i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it! ok ill say why in a minute...first of all you really surprised me how u managed to turn breck's characterisation around so that the reader actually is able to have some semblance of sympathy for him...cause i have to admit after chap 8 i was seriously beginning to hate him soo deeply to the point i was secretly hoping you would introduce sumone else...but screw that idea now im actually curious to see their relationship being about what i really adore in this chap in particular-its so great how their relationship is not anymore abt him being the dominant and good how she yells at him for the truth which she rightly deserves...and the best part of course is the twist at the end...its so brilliant cause if she knew him before it doesnt seem so ive written too much!in case ur wondering where all this fury towards macho stalkers comes from...ive been stalked at least twice before and it was nt pretty...well the guys who did it were not thats for sure...haha...cheers! p.s. having exams but will try to review regularly
cherry617 chapter 9 . 5/29/2007
ah! you fig newton! why'd you stop there?
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