Reviews for Shadow of Doubt |
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![]() ![]() ![]() yay! It looks like someone finally updated...well that was a nice chapter worth waiting for...the plot and character development is progressing rather nicely i must say...im liking leana's taking control of the situation and so overall the chapter is great as it is getting more realistic. I still don t get Breck though haha...he seems really erratic at times...weird guy lolz...looking forward to your next update...cheers bianca |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story definitly keeps you thinking. keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! Dramatic! So the seemingly nice stalker/kidnapper guy really does have a dark side... Hm. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was INTENSE! i loved it. I can't wait for your next chapter. Seriously, update son, please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I never thought I was one for aggresiveness, but DAMN! That was hott! However, I believe that if the woman says no, she means NO! Anyway, I REALLY hope Breck doesn't turn out like his father. It would be so sad! :-( Please update soon again! I check my email for updates VERY often. As in, hm... maybe every 5 to 10 minutes. Yes. I'm obsessed with reading. Obviously I don't check during the day, but you know what I mean! :-D UPDATE AGAIN! sunflowersing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS STORY! *sigh* PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Please please please please please, update soon! I'll be waiting for the update! sunflowersing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn! That house is like a fantasy doll house. It sounds HUGE! I wish I could vaccation there every once in a while. Personally, I don't think I would be able to be in the big of a house (or mansion, rather) without more people. But hey, it is a FRIGGIN AWESOME PARTY HOUSE! sunflowersing |
![]() ![]() ![]() So much for being a good boy! *wink wink* Man, that guy is sexy! sunflowersing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is he counting on stockholms syndrome? A man she knows nothing about, with a murdering/rapist father, kiddnapping her, saying he is in love with her. What's a girl to do? sunflowersing |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD! He sounds super hott, but she doesn't even know him! Okay. Breathe. sunflowersing |
![]() ![]() wonderful story. can't wait for you to update it. |
![]() ![]() Great Story keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() thanks for finally updating! well that was better but i still think it would be nice to see leana being more assertive with breck...maybe she could do something to surprise him? cant wait for more...update update ...cheers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() GREAT CHAPTER! Please update soon - I LOVE this story! |
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