Reviews for How to Make a Killer
A Kiss in the Dreamhouse chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
Wow, that was...so cool!
dancingpaws chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
Im loving this :) Not usually the kind of thing that gets me reading but this is good (: Loving the 2 end lines. Its kinda ironic (?)

Really good :)

Abi xx
Your Execution chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
woah i loved it.

xoxo, Ally
Daisy Haus chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
this is one of best things I've and kind of haunting
mobman chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
Loved the second stanza more than the others, but its still an incredible poem throughout.

Mob
Angelic Hellraiser chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
No one's lucky in this one, huh?

I like it, naturally. :)
luv me like no other chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
disturbingly reminds me of the VTech incident. it was so sad.
Scorose chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
This is beautiful. Great work.
socks-lost chapter 1 . 4/7/2007
i like this alot. I liked the last two lines the best very well writen great job
Tatsu the Blade Star chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
Equal parts trauma, depression, love, betrayal, and deep rooted psychological problems. Stir well for several years until you hear the shot.

Very nice.

Later...
la mocha chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
Creepy. Love it.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
Very true social statement in this. The work itself is also very well developed, as it directly addresses the issue by being specific, and giving the reader images to connect to. Well written.
someday-i-will chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
Wow, I liked this. The ending and third stanza are great.
truefire chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
WOW. one of the best poems i've read in awhile. i like the 3rd stanza especially. good work.