|Reviews for No such thing as perfect|
| Not Afraid of Bruises chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
again, good style and form. I like how you write, you get to the point of things, but there's still that lingering feeling of emotion. keep writing.
| Daemon Tucker chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
This is very intricate. Your speed and tone slightly change when the imperfections come along, I like that. I would suggest removing the "to me" in the final lines. You bring a personal touch to the subject, but I think the final "theme" would be more penetrating without those two words. Simply a suggestion though.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
Interestingly woven social perspective. A lot of truth in this in many areas. Well written.