|Reviews for Under My Sky|
| Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 10/27/2008
their blind searches/meaningful purpose
and these tiny kisses
and most especially thinking of giant jigsaws inside myself
unique voice you have, and self-contained, but vibrant and alive...
| I dunno I'm sure I have one chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
I loved this poem quite a bit!
My only suggestions (which you don't have to use, and probably shouldn't) is that...idk, it seems kind of like it has a MAGICAl feel to it and things in the poem like "& know that I won’t forget you" and "i hope you feel the same way too" sort of take that away.
But that's just my opinion! And my opinion is, you know, wrong.
| kutipi234 chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
Aww, that was sweet! Question though, how did you seperate the stanzas in your poem? I have been having problems with that each time I post a poem...WHAT'S UP WITH THAT? lol! Anyways, I'm glad you posted this, because it was a deightful read! :)