Reviews for Watching For Me
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/18/2006
only thing is to not over capitalize certain words. each time it is used, the other words seem to lose impact. otherwise. good work

keep writing
Lemon Sorbet chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
Oh mysterious. Interesting use of capital letters... Very god, keep it up!Lemonsausagex