Reviews for The Rose and the Thorn, Original version
Rara chapter 8 . 4/12
I read your story through as soon as I found it and as fast as I could. It's really very good and I beg you to update! Can't wait to see what will happen between the two of them and I am impressed with the way you give your characters a background, how everything could be real and their personal developments are quite realistic. So again please please update soon!
Guest chapter 8 . 11/2/2013
You really need to put up another chapter im dieing to see whats next, i have been wait a long time.
beverlyamethyst16 chapter 6 . 6/7/2013
Nice chapter :)
beverlyamethyst16 chapter 5 . 6/2/2013
Aww amazing chapter :D I really liked it, however sad it was :(
beverlyamethyst16 chapter 4 . 5/28/2013
Awww that was so cute :) You were right! I loved this one!
noriepie chapter 2 . 5/28/2013
Her books pressed tightly against her aching breasts...
hi lol, just wondering, why is her boobs aching out of a sudden?
XxXAngels-of-the-DarkXxX chapter 4 . 5/27/2013
Yay! I'm so glad you're back! I love Bekah's personality! Kind of reminds me of me a little bit :)
beverlyamethyst16 chapter 3 . 5/26/2013
Amazing chapter :) I liked it!
twibbit chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
:) cant wait for your the upcoming revised chapters !
veroniica chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
i like this story! :) I want more chapters please!
Michael's Divinity chapter 4 . 5/12/2011
Hello again. Wonderful chapter. I love the dimension to your story. I can't wait for the inevitable to happen. And I was right about Bekah losing her sibling. I didn't suspect Fields' tradgey. I did, however, like his essay/story... whatever it was. I found myself laughing at a few parts, cool, cool.

It was a delightful read, as always. Until my next review, bid you adieu.
Michael's Divinity chapter 3 . 5/11/2011
The story Rebekah wrote seemed funny, managed to keep Fields' attention. 'Course I wonder if he honestly liked the story or if he is just really likes her.

I like how you started the story with her not really wanting to like him, but she steadily starts to-wants to, even. I'm just waiting for the moment that she and him actually do something that violates school policy.

The narrative is nice, full of resentment and teenage angst. She lost something, understandably she does the whole drinking think. I forgot to comment about that review, though I would do it now.

Until my next review, I bid you adieu.
Michael's Divinity chapter 2 . 5/11/2011
I enjoy your dialogue very much so. I like the slow progression to your characterization. One of my favorite parts was: "Drown the memories, drown the sadness. Amen." Now, I can't rightly say why I liked that as much as I do, but good work. I am actually thinking of postponing my plans for a while and continue reading this story. I cannot fathom as to why I am so fascinated by it. ...I'm suppose to be talkin' abot the story... Sorry.

Back to the story, then. I have a few ideas why Fields is having her do these preposterous assignments, but I'm still my tongue until a later time. Until my next review, I bid you adieu.
Michael's Divinity chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
I like this so far. Though, I haven't much to comment on, I'm sure that will change as I continue reading. If your re-write is better than this version, I will donate all my spare time-save for time that I use to write-to read all the posting of it. Keep writing, you're good.

Until my next review, I bid you adieu.
beverlyamethyst16 chapter 13 . 8/30/2010
Great :)
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