|Reviews for The Rose and the Thorn, Original Version with a big twist|
| me chapter 13 . 5/20/2010
are you even gonna finish it?
| Vermillion Gates chapter 13 . 4/19/2010
I read this story before and I loved it!
| Elle for Love to Write chapter 13 . 2/22/2010
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
| lovevictim chapter 13 . 2/19/2010
I have recently started reading this story of yours, though i have read "romancing the rose"and "young teacher" and i am currently reading "chasing butterflies and chocolate"
but anyways getting back to this i am really enjoying this story, and do i have to say i LOVE Fields and Rose, i like the whole forbidden love kind of thing going on here, i mean it's obvious they want to be together, more obvious because Rose is actually seducing him infront of the class lol (she has a lot of guts) and its working, i mean Fields is getting seduced (that man has no control) i would how he managed to kind of reject her you know, talking about that i felt so bad for her.
Another person i feel bad for is renee, her parents won't make her abort right ?
Hope Fields manages to knock some sense into them, but that's only possible if Rose tells him, coming to which, Will she tell him? or will she'll be so absorbed in her problems, no offence i kind of think she's selfish but that's what makes her character seem real, no ones perfect and that's what you show in Rose and i like that.
Stopping here because i don't know what else to say lol, but that your a really great writer.
| jobrogirl1995 chapter 10 . 2/19/2010
Beaver reverence really cute lol She got in trouble P lol great chapter
| jobrogirl1995 chapter 11 . 2/19/2010
OMG i never thought she would ever do that. And never thought he would react that way i would of thought he would have self control lol Great chapter by the way D
| jobrogirl1995 chapter 12 . 2/19/2010
Rebekah bad girl getting Dan all flustered and all lol jking but great chapter . can't wait till next one.
| jobrogirl1995 chapter 13 . 2/19/2010
Ok right now i'm making up for my reviewing procrastination lol This chapter was crazy and we got something going on. Had some really parts in it to. and Dan had alot of self control too lol Can't wait till next chapter D sorry for my laziness
| pbgurl chapter 13 . 2/19/2010
"Eat that bar? she thought as she fiddled with the wrapping. She'd rather encase it in glass and keep it forever."
LOL, that line cracked me up.
| GirlWithTheDancingCherryTrees chapter 11 . 2/18/2010
It seems a bit rushed, but I'm not minding it. XP -sigh- Her pride's getting to herr... w
| GirlWithTheDancingCherryTrees chapter 10 . 2/18/2010
She may think she's not a child, but they way she's acting is certainly childish. Surely, if you go to vodka for comfort, isn't that a bit immature on her part? Oh well. I love the story so far!
| pbgurl chapter 12 . 2/18/2010
HAHAHA! I'm really enjoying Bekah's tough attitude, especially when she shot down Brian. _
| XanthousYoshi chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
Wow, this was really good. I loved the part where she say's "Geez, why couldn't they bring in a young teacher for that subject?" xDD You're hilarious! Keep up the good work w
| pbgurl chapter 11 . 2/17/2010
LOL! I LOVED Dan's reactions! It cracked me up. _
Bekah's inner thoughts are hilarious sometimes, especially at the end of the chapter, lol!
| xoxhp chapter 11 . 2/17/2010
DAMN I LOVED IT!