very moving, i give it four stars. it would have five for one reason only, it is a little short (i write them short too, i just kinda like long poems).

good job

I read this after you reviewed to Behind Locked Doors, it is very well written, very meaningful, and I like it a lot. I find, when I am writing, that my best works come from when I am not trying to write something wonderful, just something real. You are very talented and I hope to read more of your work in the future.

I actually enjoyed this piece very much. I like the rhyming scheme. :) I like the message. Well done!