|Reviews for Better and Best|
| no one chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
This is REALLY good. OMG, like I about cried. Wow. Even if you've never done something exactly like this, you can definately relate, especially with those negative words/thoughts or thinking you're not good enough. I think you should add another line in or two though, like something along the lines of an eating disorder or drugs/drinking or dating or something, because people can be the same way in that sort of thing too.
| Wylloa chapter 1 . 10/18/2006
...*stares at screen speachlesslly*
That was simply amazing. I liked the last part... this is so, oh I dunno, Perfect...I dont know what else to say...
| Blazing Icecrystals chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
That's so tragic, but it really does parallel what goes through the thought process at times. Good job. Great theme, and you carried your topic well.