Reviews for Fate and Laundry Soap |
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![]() ![]() Landry girl, no party book worm, shy girl x Hot band guy, heartthrob and one man guy (Basically men who are loyal to only only girl ). There's that and I wanted to see the awkward part of their relationship |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww fate is something I like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it :D So cute! Please add more! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi there! Your story has been added to the "oneshot" category of A Drop of Romeo. Here's your review: Ali Thinks: It's stories like "Fate and Laundry Soap" that make me love short and sweet one-shots so much. Despite the fact that they all make be super jealous of my super dreary life, I just adore them to death, and reading "Fate and Laundry Soap" has only solidified the adoration. On a Friday night, Adam happens upon a girl doing her laundry on a Friday night and reading a sociology book. He's not the most suave at starting a conversation with her, but that's okay, we like a slightly clumsy tête-à-tête (especially one with a cute musician, holla). Like most short one-shots, there isn't a lot of depth to it. That being said, it's definitely on the lighthearted and fluffy side, not the pointless and why-did-I-just-read-that side. To be honest, that's what I liked most about it; it's a short, happy story that is guaranteed to get a little smile on even the most stoic of faces. I do have to say, though, after reading this one-shot, all I want is for someone to buy me a sociology book and point me to the nearest Laundromat next Friday. But seriously. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww! Really cool! I like how you ended it! Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha Laundromat. Such a silly word. :) Peace, Love and Happiness! :) Bubbly Girl |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow dis is seriously super cuteeeeee...FATE lovely one :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() meeting a rockstar at a Laundromat; cute! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Cute :) Rockstar and the shy girl. haha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Laundromats. I love quite a bit of your work. But yes. Cute. Adorable. Lovely. I loved it. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() How adorably cliche :P x] |
![]() ![]() ![]() S'okay. Me thinkies proverbial bookworms be gangsta too y'know X)? Good story, a little bit random, but well-written nonetheless. Thanks for bringing it to fictionpress :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was So sweet! |