|Reviews for The Last Chariot for Valhalla|
| hellbentheretic chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
Could there be redemption for those that feel that this life is the only one you get? Yes, I think, b/c it is all about how we live. That sounds kinda cheesy . . .
Being an Atheist myself that has a memory three inches long you tend to drift through life and see things in there brilliance for an instant at times, but mostly you see a haze and without faith to cut through that haze you can rely only on yourself. But I feel relying on yourself is only as good as a deadline. If I have a deadline to meet in a class or at a job I'll do it because it's pertanent at the time, but put me by myself and any deadline that is set is tenuous at best.
It also helps to have a loved one close by to help too be they friend or family.
What I'm tryin' to say here is that I like your poem. It's images and language are very thought provoking and the title is suggestive of something more than the sum of what is layed down here.