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lackluster chapter 1 . 10/12/2006
this is interesting. you have a really good way of making the words relatable. i almost want to see more of the conversation, the everything, but the way you ended it was even better. gorgeous ending line.
your scripted romance chapter 1 . 10/6/2006
ooh! ooh! I've decided that the best hting about your writing is the last line or few lines. you have a knack for summing up the whole piece in a few words. I loved it.
hey maria chapter 1 . 10/4/2006
Ooh, I love the dialogue in this. There's not much of it, but you make it easy to imagine the rest. You show the awkwardness, the hope, the hesitancy. It's all really well-done. Great job.
autumnmurder chapter 1 . 10/4/2006
Well done! I loved this, very easy to relate to. :)