Reviews for I Almost Wish You Were Mine
Fatima chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
I love your writing.
awwww chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
i almost cried when i read this. this would actually work for the project too. it's really good. congragulations, you are offocialy the greatest writer ever!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
There are lots of good things happening in this poem, so I'll just point out a few of them. I like the constant refrain, as the persona wishes the child were hers. But I especially like the second to last stanza where you don't use that refrain as the last line... instead the persona laments about the fact that the world will corrupt the child. Also, the part about living a hundred years from now was well-placed: right when the poem seems a bit repetitive, you throw in a wild card and then change it up. Nice job.
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
Gorgeous. So beautiful - and I can relate to that feeling to, as I have nephews who are so lovely and sweet and I want them! I love the sixth stanza, that was my favourite. Lovely :D
sarah1491 chapter 1 . 10/7/2006
aw, i love it! it's so sweet!
BearHeart chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
That was beautiful.