Reviews for Choosing
Sonata IX chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
I was surprised that some of the other reviews thought this was related to religion/spirituality. Was that intended or just the readers' interpretation? When I read, I visualized some kind of large, graceful bird...the comments surprised me.

The italics are an interesting touch...to me, it felt like a I was reading a thought or memory, more tenuous than a 'spoken' poem.
dumbfounded chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
wow. i am sitting here dumfounded at you're ability to write so amazingly.
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
This is such a sad piece. My favourite lines 'I did not take a side -/Lukewarm. I was lukewarm' and the ending. So beautiful. Well written, keep writing.
Siyaa chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
Absolutely gorgeous. It made me cry...
sarah1491 chapter 1 . 10/7/2006
nicely written and i love the use of italics. it creates a sort of magestic feel. great job.
Christina chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
Mt. 9:2-8Jn. 20:23Jn. 20:222 Cor. 5:17-20James 5:13-15James 5:16Mt. 18:181 Jn 5:16
BearHeart chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
How sad to believe that choices one makes removes one from being worthy of Divine Love. Well written.