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   Basara chapter 1 . 10/5/2006 the move on... nice... |
| My Tears Don't Fall chapter 1 . 10/4/2006 Well, not bad, but you need to fix it. Haikus go 5-7-5 and yours is 6-6-5. In the first line, you can simply remove the word "the." The second line won't be that easy, but you can do it. :)Continue writing. ~stlouisrams00 |