Reviews for The Winds as my Wittness
Succulent chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
Yes, it is 6 beats, with regards to the last line. However, I do feel that it does add to the poetry, and to the meaning, and as such, it will remain.

Thanks.
Frore chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
Aw, pretty haiku...

But "The morrow never came" is 6 syllables.