Reviews for The Crusade
AnyaAnanda chapter 1 . 12/20/2003
this is good! if you are interested in the crusades i think you would like my piece Blood and Destruction!
chairmanmeow chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
I like it. Great idea.
Meister chapter 1 . 1/30/2003
nice poem, kinda points out the meaningsless nature of crusades. Furthermore I think it raises the question: "is God good when his warriors are cruel?"
Lucas Harper chapter 1 . 11/12/2002
Ok, so I am totally jealous.. you are a brilliant poet.. please give us more. :)
Orntt chapter 1 . 6/11/2002
Interesting... nice to see someone writing proper poetry for a change!

Safe in my home and wearied then, I pray

to Him who made all things on this green Earth:

"Dear God, keep your Crusaders far away

I wish they'd never been given birth!"

Sorry, just had to put my oar in. Yours is better.
Aerdwynn chapter 1 . 5/3/2001
That's neat, alot of feeling in it. ~Wynnie
Diviana chapter 1 . 4/7/2001
It's God... you weren't supposed to know about His Crusaders...
meowzy chapter 1 . 3/10/2001
What's not to like? You portrayed an excellent scenerio! Nice, vibrant words! :)