Reviews for Act 1, Scene 2
in a jar pk chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
i can relate to this so much, as i am a theatre kid myself and all that lol.

i would love to have you contribute; though i'm not quite sure when we'll officially start on it. probably not till after november 18th, as i've got a production to do and the like. i think there's private messaging on here, now...i really don't use my email. i hope we can work something out, your work is amazing. take care. xx
Elizabeth Bilberry chapter 1 . 10/18/2006
Isn't it almost sad how people can just sit and watch these morbid plays almost. You poem brings up emotions in me that I have tried to keep inside.

EB
x account closed x chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
wow-

definetly a huge "well done" with this one. imagry, perfect. I couldn't help but picture it in my heada nd it was effortless.

and the format, great job with it. the stress on the "my"'s and "i'm"'s made it that much more "fun" to read.

i really liked this :)
life like whoa chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
I like the imagery in this piece, and I like how you compare it to being in a play.

well done.