Reviews for Superiority
The Anarchist Abendroth chapter 1 . 10/6/2006
Interesting story. It's funny how some people act after things like that. They go to the very brink of death, and they come back and they at the very least try to act unaffected. I don't know this girl, so I don't know what she's really like or what she's thinking, but regardless, this is a really cool poem. kudos and stuff.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
This really puts the reader into the situation well. I do like how this is non-specific, as it applies to a global social issue, and is therefore relatable through the anonymity. Tone works well to establish the scene and back story for the reader. Good work.
Artemis Obscure chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
I liked the matter-of-fact voice which the poem was written in. That was intersting.