Reviews for No Sight, All Silence
brokendreams21 chapter 1 . 10/6/2006
Hm. The last line had a way of really finalizing the entire poem. The fog played quite the important role in the poem and I really liked how you used it and how it added to the overall effect of the pome. Great job!

Thanks for the review! (And sorry for the ditzy comments.)

(PS It seems to me as though you like Card. I read Ender's Game last year and I was wondering whether the others were any good. Just curious.)

Awesome job again!
temerity chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
The title was very intriguing...the poem was a little vague (there's no setting, but that works here somehow)...but it did have the theme of fog running throughout, which I did like.

Keep it up! :)
sidt4gurl chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
I like it. I can picture the scene in my mind, it's like you know what they must be feeling because in one way or another I'm sure a lot of people have felt like that. I can definitely relate to it. Keep it up.