Something's bothering me when I thought Ani's going to end up with Majai, but when it's Kyarhu, everything's perfect! Other than that I really enjoyed this!

Very interesting and unexpected.

I quite enjoyed it. You're a creative and talented writer. I especially loved the endings and how it came together. Also the snippet on nuclear war. Maybe not such a fantasy world after all. It made it all the more interesting.

I would just like to say that Imani is my sister's name

This excites me becuase finally there's a name in this story that I can pronounce

This was really well written-a very accurate portrayl of life inside the castle. I also liked Anijou's character immensely-very analytical and insightful. The plot, however, I felt was rather lacking. The journey they went on seem rather meaningless and very slow in developing.

that scene where their bodies were found

was absolutely disturbing. but im happy they had

a happy ending. though Majai ending up with

Tara was a bit disturbing too (though it wasnt

TOO bad) im glad they all ended up happy :DD

NOO!

and Mukamutara saw them, they were the

Bunch of fools? D:

majai and that lady? wierd

NOW he definitely cant die!

hes going to be a father!

im unbelievably excited!

I love these two :)

i hope he does not die.

i LOVE Kyarhu!

for nearly half a year?

oh my. and that last part..

whats happened to Majai?

loved this chapter.

one of the best? haha.

i especially loved the part where

Damu watched them.

reminds me of jack sparrow and that lady :P

love the fox demon :D

so does that mean Majai loves Deluhia?

i dont like that :(

and is the blonde baby hers?

i love the story :D

but the baby with blonde hair?

who's is it?

Anijou or Deluhia?

which one is blonde?

and i love that they finally did it!

NO!

Deluhai is pregnant?

that will be bad :(

& what is his mother talking about?

what part? confusing.