Aw...

That was beautiful and sad.

Wow.

I can totally relate to this. I have a sister who is roughly the same age as me and we had a childhood similar to this. Care-free and wonderful.

Love your stuff.

Check your spelling.

Ad'e

Wow wow wow! I don't see enough of good writing like this on fictionpress! This is the stuff that this website was made more! Arg, you make me want to increase my writing skillz tenfold (too bad I'm learning how to draw right now).

Wow, I'm so glad I took a chance and decided to read this! I really have a feel for who your main character is and I loved the descriptive language you used. It seemed poetic at parts...and it flowed really easily! Great job! :)