|Reviews for oak|
| Sir Scott chapter 1 . 10/6/2006
That was deep. I have always liked nature poems.
Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, ~SirScott~
| A. J. Krautwurst chapter 1 . 10/6/2006
those last two lines seem so quiet and small in comparision with the rest of the poem. your description is so rich in the first two stanzas, and then the ending is so simple. i know what you mean by it seeming unfinished somehow, and that's the only thing i could think of that might be the reason. that final couplet seems a bit weak for such strong imagery in the rest of the poem.
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 10/6/2006
Wow, very thought-provoking. I'm not sure what to say. Lovely imagery. Great! Write on, you're very talented!