Reviews for Exiled, Loved, Tempted and Unnamed
Ophelia's Crown chapter 1 . 10/11/2006
I don't know why, but this poem strangely reminds me of something Dylan might write! It has that playful yet deeply poetic undertones to the story- Great job. I love the style.
felicia13 chapter 1 . 10/6/2006
That was odd. The rhyming made it awkward and that added to the confusion of the story ... which was really weird, by the way.

If this was an experiment, so I'd say stick with the song-styled things you've been doing. You can do those well. This just came out ... bizarre.

So ... yeah.

Felicite.