|Reviews for Bastions|
| JoeD123 chapter 1 . 2/1/2007
Allo! Is am readings this here stories once agains. It is not at all d*ldos*.
Well anyways this first chapter is better the second time. I like the good exposition of Ethan. U set the stage pretty well for ethan's character. His attitude is great. He is still my favorite character and its cool to come back and look at him again.
I have a feeling that the man getting couch time will come back later on, but i am probably up the good work.
| Angel chapter 44 . 2/1/2007
Love the new profile. The Vanguard Kingdom's based on our school, huh? I can totally see that... *random grumblings about term papers and required fun*
Great chapter. Sagsr grasses-you DO owe me a dollar for finding that pun. I don't care what you say-I was about to find it anyway, with or without your help. Really! :p
The Theran gods are great-Terrible Orrick and La Camille must have quite the sibling rivalry...
Feel sorry for the dog...love the Conquerer accent, though. It's so unusual. Hernan was great, too, when he was growling at the other dog...I can pretty much tell what he's saying. "Sasha, Sasha, NO. NO. Alright? Sasha, listen to me, don't-no, NO, DON'T-Sasha-SASHA-GAH, YOU STUPID LITTLE-" Yeah. _
Hakeey, the bell just rang. Gotta go...time to do things for the greater good of the Vanguard Kingdom. _~
| Alteng chapter 48 . 2/1/2007
It seems so strange that Morry/Aldrick could be so headstrong like Toskar, and he is able to maintain the brain wash that Ethan had given him. The new memory thing was only suppose to change him soomewhat. It seems like he was an aggressive ass.
Penny and the King and queen seem to be all right as well. Seamus is a good example of that. If Uldrain is a good just ruler, why are they hated so much? Of course, they seem to be at war with the Void Kingdom and not the Bastions.
I would have liked it if Aldrick was just a peasant or normal thug, but you know what I write.
I was rather amused at the name of Seamus for the dog. It reminds me of a Pink Floyd song. It is on Meddle, and the dog barks all the way through it.
Poor Sasha. He needs a new master. I am still surprised that the wolves can be so subdued.
| Ever Be chapter 47 . 1/27/2007
Holy shit. This is a seriously awesome story. I never really read longer stories anymore, I didn't notice this had so many chapters when I first started reading it.
You have quite a nice bit of thought put into this, you need to get this thing published, it really rocks!
Hope to see more soon.
| KaiaLeigh chapter 47 . 1/25/2007
Great chapter, can't wait to read more.
| KaiaLeigh chapter 46 . 1/25/2007
Aww poor Hernan
| KaiaLeigh chapter 45 . 1/25/2007
Awesome so we finally know Morry's real first name.
| KaiaLeigh chapter 44 . 1/25/2007
| KaiaLeigh chapter 43 . 1/25/2007
oh man if only Ethan got annoyed enough that he threw a rock at the pigeon and noticed it down, lol.
Great chapter, I haven't been on fictionpress to read lately since I was starting out a new semester. I have a bit of time for reading tonight though.
| ELF chapter 47 . 1/25/2007
yay! Sasha! he's funny...
i love how Isabella calls him a dumb mutt...poor guy...
poor manic depressive, chronically self-deprecating Wolf...
i like how the Wolves have owners...but i feel sorry for them...cuz their owners can be mean...poor Wolves...
poor Kari...so sad...kinda harsh putting Wolves to sleep though, isn't it? shows how much (or rather little) they're appreciated...
love the last line...Hernan makes it sound like he's got a plan, but he really doesn't...hehe! :):)
| ELF chapter 46 . 1/25/2007
poor Isabella...i feel sorry for her stuck out there in the Sagsr Grasses all alone...
"“And, are those Hernan’s pants?”" hehe! great line...very funny...
poor, poor Toyer...that's gotta hurt...
i love how Isabella doesn't finish counting to three before ripping out the arrow...poor Toyer...
great chapter, now we know that Hernan's a werewolf...yay! he's awesome...:):)
| Alteng chapter 47 . 1/25/2007
I think that Sasha is a guy's name, but it does sound awful girly. I listen to some off the wall loud music, and there is a fellow named Sascha Paeth, who produces some CDs and I think he's the singer for Heaven's Gate.
Anyway, I am still curious as to how did the wolves get themselves into the sevitude, and Sasha is really broken. Were these guys bred for this? And does Sasha mean that they will give their life for their owners?
Anyway, it is a really interesting chapter indeed. Can't say I've ever seen werewolves in servitude to mere humans like this before!
| Alteng chapter 46 . 1/24/2007
Gee, she is a bright one. Other than Ethan, she's the only one to figure that out.
I kind of thought that his affliction was something that was born instead of infected, but it could well be that this would make the Conquerors even more nasty. I would be interested in seeing how all that comes about, but I am certain that you will get into a discussion of the Conquerors soon enough. Hey, at least, Hernan isn't a mindless killing machine like other werewolves.
| ELF chapter 45 . 1/24/2007
i love the fight...very...interesting!
"“She was over there a minuet ago!”" huh? a minuet? don't you mean a minute? just wondering...
i love the conqueror dialect...so funny...Penny's great...poor Morry.
Toskar's interesting..."“And willone finda that filthy dog o’mine?”" hehe! the dog...
great chapter (my computer finally decided to work) :):)
| Alteng chapter 45 . 1/24/2007
Okay, afer some effort, and the fact that fictionpress was telling me this chapter didn't exist, I got to it.
I just knew that someone had to recognise Morry. Actually, I like the name Aldrick better . . . I would.
It is funny that the Conquerer Kingdom would send out so many fighters to bring back such a small group, unless Charles gave them quite a bit of information about them. After all, Morry and Norman are quite forminable foes, and this is a known fact, and as far as Charles would be concerned, the rest of them would be useless.
I am getting quite interested in the roles of the weredogs. They seemed to be widely used among the Conquerers. I wonder does every conquerer have one to command, or is it the higher mucks.
And Peeny seems to be a forminable piece in and of herself. Ah, it could have been worse. It could have been Aldrick's girlfriend ( or his mom!).