|Reviews for Bastions|
| ELF chapter 33 . 12/5/2006
"The next night, at roughly the same time, he came again." and again and again and again... poor guy...no time to recuperate...
I like how Charles and Akeelah are controlling him from afar...and not letting him stop just because he's badly injured.
Nice chapter, great job, poor Odder...:)
| ELF chapter 32 . 12/5/2006
"“I thought you died,”
I die when my followers stop believing
“If I could I would.”
Hence why I am inside your head"
love it...great conversation...
so now the Odder has attacked them once...
Ethan's awesome! hehe!
so Odders are used to kill mages, huh? Ethan really doesn't like them...
Loved this chapter! Great job. :)
| ELF chapter 31 . 12/5/2006
Smiles! hehe! love it!
"like watching a sledgehammer hit a kitten" hm...only you would come up with that...great quote!
Hernan is awesome!
"She knew which plants were edible, which would give diarrhea, which would make your insides explode, and which were downright poisonous." great. now their insides won't explode. hehe!
And Isabella is the leader...nothing new there! Their little band is amazing. love it.
"It happened when the malice of Charles Hin came back to haunt them…or rather, chop them up into little bits with a sketchy-looking axe." hehe! great end to a chapter... I wonder what happens now? :):):):):)
| ELF chapter 30 . 12/5/2006
I love it! :):):):)
Charles is so happy...it's kinda scary.
poor Odder...he hates being touched...physical therapy must be pretty bad, huh?
now the Odder has a purpose: bring back Isabella, get a trial. hehe! "But a trial? For him?" love it! "“They say, to survive in the wilderness, you need only an axe and some common sense, I’ve given you your axe. Now, Akeelah here…will give you some common sense.”" great quote...
Akeelah's giving him some common sense, eh? that'll be interesting...:)
| ELF chapter 29 . 12/5/2006
Charles is great...
love the "state of the art feeding system". very good idea...
poor supervisor...he's so scared of Charles..."wondering if he’d ever see his wife again" poor guy!
Odders are interesting, aren't they? you seem to like Odders with telekinetic abilities...Very interesting...
Charles is so happy to have found this Odder, isn't he? (heh, heh, heh...)
great chapter...Charles is a great character...
| ELF chapter 28 . 12/5/2006
absolutely love this chapter! Akeelah is great...Charles is creepy... perfect.
"“Shut up, I’m blissing.” "! love it!
"Charles hoped he’d get a nice sadistic grunt he could order around. It would just make his day." great last line...love the plan...sounds great!:) can't wait to see how this turns out!
| ELF chapter 27 . 12/5/2006
great philosophical chapter...the "thing" is so...interesting.
love how he has no idea how long he's been there...and the only thing he does know is that he didn't do it...
now we've been introduced to the Odder...he's great...so now he finally gets to get out of there! yay!
love this chapter, great intro to a character, awesome job with the "thing"! :):):)
| ELF chapter 26 . 12/5/2006
"I might get another promotion with some more information" shouldn't 'promotion' be 'premonition'?
"commanding him around" sounds kinda funny...i don't know what to think about it, so whatever...
"Did you know she called me a fat ox?”" hehe! great line!
Poor Ethan...picked up and carried into his own house and forced to go with Isabella!
"“Oh, thanks, you bitch! Stick me with the sniveling little princess eh? " hehe! great one Mad!
so, Hernan is one of the bastions, eh? i love Hernan! He's amazing.
La Camille is actually helpful now, isn't she? She's awesome, and Isabella is funny. "I don't want to die!"
| KaiaLeigh chapter 34 . 12/5/2006
go figure, of all the towns it had to be poplar town.
| ELF chapter 25 . 12/5/2006
Yay! more conversations with a god! hehe!
third line, shouldn't "shoulder" be "soldier"?
poor Ethan...He's great.
love La Camille...she's so funny...and Isabella is clueless!
great chapter, love La Camille's explanation of the bastions Isabella has to find. :):)
| ELF chapter 24 . 12/5/2006
Love it! Poor Morry has nothing to pack. He's so awkward... Charles is kinda freaky... Anoosha is awesome...she's so protective of Isabella.
Like the last line...the "real world" eh?
Morry is so clueless...he doesn't realize what Charles is telling him...hehe!
| Alteng chapter 34 . 12/5/2006
Well, like duh! in that one. I would figure that the Odder would crawl through the window.
Poor Morry, he gets trouble wherever he goes, and Isabella should have smacked Ethan for his remark about a hamlet tart. He was asking for it!
I hope that your writer's block for Urd II ends soon. I miss Wes!
| Alteng chapter 33 . 12/3/2006
Ah, he'll get that trial (and most likely be found guilty and thrown back into that prison cell) if he survives this ordeal. I am really feeling sorry for the old fellow, but I would. It is easy to arose my sympathies (and I am rather moody right now away.)
It is interesting how your perspective manages to swirl around all of them. I like that. At least there is some of the odder's point of view.
| KaiaLeigh chapter 33 . 12/2/2006
great chapter, poor odder
| Sable Sky chapter 33 . 12/2/2006
Wow, marvelous work in updating so quickly! *eyes boggle at the sheer speed of it all*
Anyway, great chapter as always, I wonder what will be the outcome of this particular Odder and how he will affect Isabella...