|Reviews for Bastions|
| the sock returns chapter 19 . 11/4/2007
woo-hoo! part 2! yeah! i like the festival, and the colors, it makes bastion seem like a real place C:
the cencus? how do you think of this stuff? i would never think of that w
i love the description of the woman, especially how her voice is 'deep ... almost as luxurious as her hair' XD
i like how she's always taking as if she's not there, like she's just watching stuff happen to her from somewhere else, it's adds to the hautiness. (is that a word?)
i really like 'noosh, she's interesting! gads, you just put out interestign character after character, don't you? STOP THAT! YOU'RE TOO GOOD! must keep reading! :3 i hope there's no problems for poor morry, then again, it wouldn't be much of a story without problems. c:
| sock in the dark of the night chapter 18 . 11/3/2007
GADS wifey. i'm really, really into this! SO MUCH. i can't wait to read more, you know, in like 2 seconds x3 the characters completely rule! if you don't make a comic of this, i totally will! i'm serious! if you're busy doing urf, i'll draw up some pages for this! then again, this is your story and you probably don't want me messing with it.
off to read more!
| sockera chapter 17 . 11/3/2007
yay, morry is back *w* ethan is being so nice ::COUGH:: what? 3
| the sock wants to keep reading chapter 16 . 11/3/2007
yay, toyer is so awesome! i wish he wouldn't keep everything so secret though! eks, morry is gonna stay morry~
| sock is unavailable chapter 15 . 11/3/2007
::eyes glued to computer screen:: mory
| socks chapter 14 . 11/3/2007
EEP! ::chases after morry::
| one sock to find them chapter 13 . 11/3/2007
oh man, are they gonna tell morry what's going on? HUH HUH HUH HUH? NO TIME TO CHAT MUST KEEP READING KTHNX
| one sock to rule them all chapter 12 . 11/3/2007
gads, loved this chapter too! i can't think of what to say because i'm so into i just want to keep reading and reading. noes, but you deserve feedback! augh. hernan rules... and uhm... quill is a meany! and must read more!
| sock in a half shell chapter 11 . 11/3/2007
o finally we get to see what's up with ethan! this is pretty cute ::cough:: what 3
the characters only get more and more interesting with every chapter! can't... stop... reading...
| one sock for the price of one chapter 10 . 11/3/2007
hernan is pretty cool. i wonder what ethan is giving him.
i like this whole chapter, the whole description of theior relationship is interesting. the last sentece especially is cool. dogs are awesome X3
| sock in the river chapter 9 . 11/3/2007
i'm so into this! my reviews are getting shorter because i can't be bothered to stop reading XD
'He vocally damned her to every hell he could think of, and there were quite a few.' ethan is awesome.
all the characters are so interesting, i love your descriptions of the things they are thinking and doing, it makes them so real.
aw ethan cares about morry... ::cough:: what?
oh, poor morry is so confused, i just want to hug him and make it all better D:
| socksockbobock chapter 8 . 11/3/2007
chapter 7 page keeps messing up! NOES! but i couldn't stop reading so i just went on to chapter 8. gads is morry adorable, he's so cute and bumbly with his widdle accent and confusion-ness. quill that hoor! appriciate morry and his cute-ness! i also like hernan and his glaring. those two are so awesome. you rock so much, wifey!
| sockander the great chapter 6 . 11/3/2007
haha, fifteen locks. you're so good at making little details that just bring the character out.
morry is so adorable! he's all dopey and cute, and is all sad about his accent. gads he's so cute!
'don't take his pants away' XD love it
eks, i love this so much! must read more!
| sock-a-roo chapter 5 . 11/3/2007
haha, the first paragraph does a good job of the 'confused and sick' feeling. especially the circus bed ride bed circus what?
i like the transition of memory being described, the forgetting of a few words, and the wondering of capitalization, very believable.
ha! i knew the intruder was the dog! well, it only makes sense...
haha! that's so cool how the accent is still there. the gramatic lessons while he's throwing up is hilarious XD i can see all this so clearly, you're such a good storyteller!
eks, must keep reading! very hooked now!
| sockey chapter 4 . 11/3/2007
'Asleep essentially meant drugged into oblivion.' hurhurhurhur
i like the paragraph about mind altering, it really makes it seem like a real craft. i also like the sentences: 'The mage couldn’t figure out of his own personality was a result of adverse conditions, or actually his true personality. Frankly, he didn’t care.' ethan's such a character XD
haha, wiping out the memory of his family and happy childhood memories. lol, poor guy! i love how ethan is gonna make him mister peppy help-everyone, i can't wait to see how this will play out XD
'Now, all Ethan needed to do was break contact, and, now very weak with fatigue, he did so in a rather unceremonious way. He broke contact by promptly passing out and falling to the ground.' hahaha poor ethan ::huggles him while he can't hit me:
oh the intruder is interesting... ::reads intently, totally into it!:: hum interesting, he was supposed to keep him safe, huh? ::MUST KEEP READING::