Reviews for Autumn Leaves
P.H. Wise chapter 1 . 10/6/2006
If the best way to criticise a poem is to write a better one, then Robert Frost has already done the job for me:

"Nature's first green is gold, Her hardest hue to hold. Her early leaf's a flower; But only so an hour. Then leaf subsides to leaf. So Eden sank to grief, So dawn goes down to day. Nothing gold can stay."
An-Author-At-Heart chapter 1 . 10/6/2006
Beautiful! The imagery was so lovely, well written. Gosh, it makes you want to step outside and just ran across a park filled with trees while they turn colours! I really liked the writing style of it, the rhymes were not the usual pattern and scheme yet it still flowed so nicely. Wonderful job, keep up the good work!
CELESTIALVISIONARY chapter 1 . 10/6/2006
I like that,it was very placid. I admit I only understood half of it but still...Here's a poem I think you'll like. I think it's by Robert Frost:Nature's first green is goldHer hardest hue to holdHer early leaf's a flowerBut only so an hourThen leaf subsides to leafSo Eden sank to griefSo dawn goes down to dayNothing gold can stay.

Good job. Keep writing. Constance