|Reviews for Autumn Leaves|
| P.H. Wise chapter 1 . 10/6/2006
If the best way to criticise a poem is to write a better one, then Robert Frost has already done the job for me:
"Nature's first green is gold, Her hardest hue to hold. Her early leaf's a flower; But only so an hour. Then leaf subsides to leaf. So Eden sank to grief, So dawn goes down to day. Nothing gold can stay."
| An-Author-At-Heart chapter 1 . 10/6/2006
Beautiful! The imagery was so lovely, well written. Gosh, it makes you want to step outside and just ran across a park filled with trees while they turn colours! I really liked the writing style of it, the rhymes were not the usual pattern and scheme yet it still flowed so nicely. Wonderful job, keep up the good work!
| CELESTIALVISIONARY chapter 1 . 10/6/2006
I like that,it was very placid. I admit I only understood half of it but still...Here's a poem I think you'll like. I think it's by Robert Frost:Nature's first green is goldHer hardest hue to holdHer early leaf's a flowerBut only so an hourThen leaf subsides to leafSo Eden sank to griefSo dawn goes down to dayNothing gold can stay.
Good job. Keep writing. Constance